torn by love

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By shreya

i cant think of anything,as memories flood my mind i have nothing to hold on to, just an emptiness inside there's nothing to smile for without u by my side i wonder if they're true, if love is really blind all thats left of you is letters stained with tears roses pressed in books n neverending fears i wanna grow out of it, but i think i went too far there's no turnin back cause ur love's torn me apart!!!

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July 31, 2007 16:52Angel of Music

Hey great job! ~Angel of music

November 5, 2007 23:28BitterSweet

Wow! Thats deep and beautifully written. That should be a song or something.

June 21, 2008 07:12shreya

thanks...its very personal...
n im glad u liked it

January 15, 2009 16:27!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

absolutely beautiful thank you

March 14, 2009 04:34Tyler Cedric Golden

awww very sadening but such a fantastically written poem...I havent heard from you in awhile but i have written many poems since then if you would like to check them out...Tyler