Moment Of Life, by Felicia
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I find the gun in the grips of my hands
The cool mettle tempt my nerves
I crave the feeling of my finger on the trigger
And the adrenaline of the situation
Make my emotions over power me
Oh what a wonderful feeling
I slowly slide the gun to my head
And contemplate the consequences
Fearlessly I cock the gun
And as I pull the trigger
My moment of life escapes me
And I hit the floor
Felicia Mac |
Posted: 2008-01-21 21:42:56 UTC |
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2008-02-18 04:05:24 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
OH MY GOSH!! This is... um... exprssive? I just hope it helps you to write and get it all out!! |
2008-03-24 12:10:42 | User |
Seems like we have many things in common, and its amazing how we can relate to each other's poems so much. Maybe we oughta talk some time, my msn is [email protected]. Just add my msn or email me. Hope to hear from you! |
2009-03-10 03:13:17 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
thank you for your previous comments and yes when I want and try I write about 6 or 7 poems a day... :) its just I am devoted to it and it comes quiet quickly....read my poem Done! I think it will help you..and I love this poem...hmmm pessimistic it is in a similar way to me....great job! |
2009-03-12 17:27:07 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
SADLY PEOPLE WITH THERE EYES SEALED SHUT
BY PAIN OR FEAR ARE NOT OPEN TO THE OPPORTUNITY'S OF LIFE WITH SOME BEAUTY AND LOVE |