Moment Of Life, by Felicia Subscribe to rss feed for Felicia

I find the gun in the grips of my hands
The cool mettle tempt my nerves
I crave the feeling of my finger on the trigger
And the adrenaline of the situation
Make my emotions over power me
Oh what a wonderful feeling

I slowly slide the gun to my head
And contemplate the consequences
Fearlessly I cock the gun
And as I pull the trigger
My moment of life escapes me
And I hit the floor
     Felicia Mac
Posted: 2008-01-21 21:42:56 UTC

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2008-02-18 04:05:24~Stay_Beautiful~20104
OH MY GOSH!! This is... um... exprssive? I just hope it helps you to write and get it all out!!

2008-03-24 12:10:42User
Seems like we have many things in common, and its amazing how we can relate to each other's poems so much. Maybe we oughta talk some time, my msn is [email protected]. Just add my msn or email me. Hope to hear from you!

2009-03-10 03:13:17Tyler Cedric Golden
thank you for your previous comments and yes when I want and try I write about 6 or 7 poems a day... :) its just I am devoted to it and it comes quiet quickly....read my poem Done! I think it will help you..and I love this poem...hmmm pessimistic it is in a similar way to me....great job!

2009-03-12 17:27:07!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
SADLY PEOPLE WITH THERE EYES SEALED SHUT BY PAIN OR FEAR ARE NOT OPEN TO THE OPPORTUNITY'S OF LIFE WITH SOME BEAUTY AND LOVE