Moment Of Life

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By Felicia

I find the gun in the grips of my hands The cool mettle tempt my nerves I crave the feeling of my finger on the trigger And the adrenaline of the situation Make my emotions over power me Oh what a wonderful feeling I slowly slide the gun to my head And contemplate the consequences Fearlessly I cock the gun And as I pull the trigger My moment of life escapes me And I hit the floor Felicia Mac

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February 18, 2008 04:05~Stay_Beautiful~20104

OH MY GOSH!! This is... um... exprssive? I just hope it helps you to write and get it all out!!

March 24, 2008 12:10User

Seems like we have many things in common, and its amazing how we can relate to each other's poems so much. Maybe we oughta talk some time, my msn is [email protected]. Just add my msn or email me. Hope to hear from you!

March 10, 2009 03:13Tyler Cedric Golden

thank you for your previous comments and yes when I want and try I write about 6 or 7 poems a day... :) its just I am devoted to it and it comes quiet quickly....read my poem Done! I think it will help you..and I love this poem...hmmm pessimistic it is in a similar way to me....great job!

March 12, 2009 17:27!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

SADLY PEOPLE WITH THERE EYES SEALED SHUT
BY PAIN OR FEAR ARE NOT OPEN TO THE OPPORTUNITY'S OF LIFE WITH SOME BEAUTY AND LOVE