what are you staring at, by Invisible Poet
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why do you look at me that way
staring at the paint on my nails
the only thing your little mind can mutter is "gay"
i've walked this path before these are wellworn trails
so my nails are black and soul is dead
so what are you staring at
for my life you wouldn't even get out of bed
but in that room i sat
full of poeple like you
the ones you want to beat with a baeball bat
yes they were staring too
so what the fuck are you staring at
so what my nails are a different shade
does that make me emo or gay
well your so much better, want to trade
like hell ill trade someone who looked at me that way
im not so different
from him, her, or you
except i have the ability to repent
believ it or not i feel sorry for you too
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Posted: 2008-02-20 10:44:24 UTC |
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2008-02-20 17:09:30 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
I love these last words in your poem:
im not so different
from him, her, or you
except i have the ability to repent
believ it or not i feel sorry for you too...
this is a truth you have ability to repent, and so does the rest of the world. so your not so different from another person.I like this very much! Great job! even with the sharp but accurate adjustments. :) Glo |
2009-03-12 03:31:26 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
it was in no sense of laughing towards your feelings as of mine it was a sense of optimism to brighten my day as well as yours hoping to improve quality in comments to one another...do not feeled alarmed or personal but such simplitic comments for they have only a minor impact upon ones life...disregard it if you must. |