what are you staring at

By Invisible Poet •
By Invisible Poet •
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I love these last words in your poem:
im not so different
from him, her, or you
except i have the ability to repent
believ it or not i feel sorry for you too...
this is a truth you have ability to repent, and so does the rest of the world. so your not so different from another person.I like this very much! Great job! even with the sharp but accurate adjustments. :) Glo
yeah your sooo good! and i agree as every one thinks that they have it better then you well you may think they suck... lol
this is really great and thnx for the comment
it was in no sense of laughing towards your feelings as of mine it was a sense of optimism to brighten my day as well as yours hoping to improve quality in comments to one another...do not feeled alarmed or personal but such simplitic comments for they have only a minor impact upon ones life...disregard it if you must.