what are you staring at

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By Invisible Poet

why do you look at me that way staring at the paint on my nails the only thing your little mind can mutter is "gay" i've walked this path before these are wellworn trails so my nails are black and soul is dead so what are you staring at for my life you wouldn't even get out of bed but in that room i sat full of poeple like you the ones you want to beat with a baeball bat yes they were staring too so what the fuck are you staring at so what my nails are a different shade does that make me emo or gay well your so much better, want to trade like hell ill trade someone who looked at me that way im not so different from him, her, or you except i have the ability to repent believ it or not i feel sorry for you too

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February 20, 2008 17:09 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I love these last words in your poem:
im not so different
from him, her, or you
except i have the ability to repent
believ it or not i feel sorry for you too...
this is a truth you have ability to repent, and so does the rest of the world. so your not so different from another person.I like this very much! Great job! even with the sharp but accurate adjustments. :) Glo

yeah your sooo good! and i agree as every one thinks that they have it better then you well you may think they suck... lol

this is really great and thnx for the comment

March 12, 2009 03:31Tyler Cedric Golden

it was in no sense of laughing towards your feelings as of mine it was a sense of optimism to brighten my day as well as yours hoping to improve quality in comments to one another...do not feeled alarmed or personal but such simplitic comments for they have only a minor impact upon ones life...disregard it if you must.