heat of your words

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By Invisible Poet •

you make me so warm and bubbly with the lighter in your voice then you sit their quite smugly never noing the joys joys of redemption gazing in to your soul so please give me your attention where your heart was, now is just coal you burn everyone around you with the words of hate and despise maybe i can change your hue and help you see the lies just take the heat out throw it away let me tell you what im about why at your words i sway because you take out your anger on everyone but yourself you put everyone else in danger you make their life a hell so god i dont understand why you want only to hurt and if your such a big man why do you treat everyone else like dirt

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March 12, 2008 19:04a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

i like this it flows and i like poetry about religion i hope you write more!

May 12, 2008 13:46Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

aww i like this poem very much especially "so god i dont understand
why you want only to hurt
and if your such a big man
why do you treat everyone else like dirt" it really expresses alot

May 16, 2008 09:10Invisible Poet

i am by no means a crossbeater and have no religion to call my own when asked i simply say agnostic so religious poems mean nothing to me

January 16, 2009 17:25Destinee Amber Kohlman

i like this. i at one point was a very big christian then things changed. your last four lines really express my confusion towards the religion thing...

February 5, 2009 15:17Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

its still wonderful

February 25, 2009 17:08Tyler Cedric Golden

actually thats exactly what i was doing i it appears i did a good job of showing it...nonetheless thank you for your comment...also i like the way this poem is expressed and the way you wrote it as well...great job