Writers block, by Felicia
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like a painter brush strokes the canvas
My pencil meets the blank page
I hold fast till my fingers purple and numb
The empty page mocks me in such a way
I remove myself to release the piercing stare
Does everyone look at me this way?
But wait, hold on stop this madness
Its only a page a blank page
How can it cause this turmoil?
How can I free myself......
From the grip it holds me under
I scream stuck in space "Free Me"
I avert my eyes from the cruel page
Curses still fresh on my lips
Only to find a small mark across the page
Lifting my curse and setting me free at last.
Felicia Mac |
| Posted: 2008-09-03 14:01:35 UTC |
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| 2008-10-01 18:00:40 | ray! |
| Interesting...I like it |
| 2008-10-17 01:17:04 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
| Wow, this one's really powerful! Expresses well and I love your way with words!! The personification and imagery really paints a good picture for the reader! |
| 2009-03-06 17:23:22 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| thank you for your previous comment and yes futurely i shall look into it and of course specifically you seemed more interested in darkening poems but in general varied poems are enjoyed by all...and this poem you wrote is quite interesting and i like it very much especially the last line..great job |
| 2009-03-14 04:51:22 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| specifically just for this poem i am leaving this comment....if you would like to know what i do to write it is simply this....for some reason multiple ideas of poems always pop up in my head and i begin to write. i can write an entire poem just by thinking of a title i think would sound good for a poem..also the same vice versa when i start writing about something an interesting or overall good in my opinion of a title pops in my head....hmm i guess basically the main thing is is that I continously have ideas for new poems some i dont get the chance to write and also i have never had writers block before...but anyways i hope this helps you some...(also getting ideas absorbed from the outlook on other poems made into ones own idea)..comment me sometime! Tyler |