Im going to kill myself, by Invisible Poet Subscribe to rss feed for Invisible Poet

Im going to kill myself
no one even knows my name
when i point the barrel to my ear
no one sheds a tear

i pull the trigger 
brains spray
the blood pool grows bigger
i never saw the next day

on my tombstone it will say
he is juts a picture on a shelf
6 feet under is where he lay
because he killed himself

we dont know his name
we found him lying dead
we believe he's to blame
in his hand was a note, here is what it said

I'm going to kill myself
no one even knows my name
now i point the barrel to my ear
now listen, no one sheds a tear
Posted: 2008-09-09 01:37:09 UTC

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2008-09-16 14:45:37Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
*tear* thats sad

2008-09-27 20:34:00MorbidMaiden
That's beautiful. Tragic, heart-breaking, but beautiful. xxx

2008-11-10 15:39:24Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
yes

2008-11-25 16:34:35Felicia
I cried today, deep inside but they were tears of joy, joy for you and your talent Felicia Mac

2009-02-05 15:20:17Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
yes...he has a very beautiful talent

2009-02-23 15:27:12Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
this is really good...thank you for the comment...

2009-03-05 15:14:17poof
WOW THIS IS VERY VERY WELL THOUGHT OF!!! KEEP WRITING!!! YOU ARE VERY GOOD!

2009-03-12 02:53:50Tyler Cedric Golden
what you want me to die too? lol....jk...anyways yes this is very depressing but i very well written poem nonetheless for all poems give out specific feelings.....great job

2009-03-19 11:24:58CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
*crying for you* this is sad. good poem but very sad!!!