Im going to kill myself

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By Invisible Poet

Im going to kill myself no one even knows my name when i point the barrel to my ear no one sheds a tear i pull the trigger brains spray the blood pool grows bigger i never saw the next day on my tombstone it will say he is juts a picture on a shelf 6 feet under is where he lay because he killed himself we dont know his name we found him lying dead we believe he's to blame in his hand was a note, here is what it said I'm going to kill myself no one even knows my name now i point the barrel to my ear now listen, no one sheds a tear

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September 16, 2008 14:45Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

*tear* thats sad

September 27, 2008 20:34MorbidMaiden

That's beautiful. Tragic, heart-breaking, but beautiful.

xxx

November 10, 2008 15:39Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

yes

November 25, 2008 16:34Felicia

I cried today, deep inside but they were tears of joy, joy for you and your talent
Felicia Mac

February 5, 2009 15:20Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

yes...he has a very beautiful talent

February 23, 2009 15:27Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is really good...thank you for the comment...

March 5, 2009 15:14poof

WOW THIS IS VERY VERY WELL THOUGHT OF!!! KEEP WRITING!!! YOU ARE VERY GOOD!

March 12, 2009 02:53Tyler Cedric Golden

what you want me to die too? lol....jk...anyways yes this is very depressing but i very well written poem nonetheless for all poems give out specific feelings.....great job

March 19, 2009 11:24CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

*crying for you* this is sad. good poem but very sad!!!