let me please

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By shreya •

don't start with your lies don't tell me those cuts don't hurt or say that your razor is in the trash don't try to hide those fresh scars i want to know it all i want to see the ugly don't keep me so far away don't ignore those screaming voices you hear say what you know you must share all you want to and keep what you cant because i can wait just don't keep me at such a distance that i cant reach you when you fall just let me be close by and I'll answer the call all you need to do is MAKE it!

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December 18, 2008 16:01Tyler Cedric Golden

uhhh wow.....interesting indeed and very brutal but it is a good poem in its own passion....if you like poems in darkness i would very much suggest reading the poem i mine called Concept Of Hell....i really think youll like it.....nice poem......

February 6, 2009 17:38*Confidential~Versifier*

I Love this.... Specially coming from a Female.. How u Want Him Closer to YOU
Yet did u know at times we males..Keep distance as our natuaral guard to keep from gettin hurt....
"Dont keep me at such a distance
that i cat reach u when u fall"
I Love that part
Keep up the Good Work