Worthless, by Invisible Poet
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You wrap your arms around me
i squeeze you tight
Of all the things you could be
do you really thinks its right
to love me the way you do
with all my problems
the answer for me is you
your love is my precious gem
but im worthless
i am dirt
and i confess
that im hurt
the way you look at me
when i stare at you
shows me what i could be
what i could do
why do you love someone like me
I am weighing you down
theres so much you could be
but im still hanging around
Im sorry
i apologize
I can be no less
Than what i am, Worthless |
| Posted: 2008-11-07 18:54:50 UTC |
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| 2008-11-18 18:43:42 | jessica |
| wow is all i can say
your realy good |
| 2009-01-26 15:32:24 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
| this is a very strong poem it is great but i dont think you see yourself very clearly... i know some people who think like the way you do.. its not bad but you should look on the bright side she dont think your weighing her down.. well at least i think not....anyways this poem is great!! p.s. your not worthless |
| 2009-02-25 18:41:43 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| sigh.....also to say you didnt like it very much....(hint: the current vote and comment being 1)...lol how sad...owell my bad.....looks like i may need to revise it or.....maybe you just need to read a better poem of mine as an example i suppose...hmmmm anyways on subject now yes indeed this poem is very good and i like the way the end resorts back to the topic....good job! |
| 2009-12-17 23:58:54 | Convalescence |
| No one is worthless. Invisible. maybe, I understand that... but everyone means something |