Worthless

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By Invisible Poet

You wrap your arms around me i squeeze you tight Of all the things you could be do you really thinks its right to love me the way you do with all my problems the answer for me is you your love is my precious gem but im worthless i am dirt and i confess that im hurt the way you look at me when i stare at you shows me what i could be what i could do why do you love someone like me I am weighing you down theres so much you could be but im still hanging around Im sorry i apologize I can be no less Than what i am, Worthless

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November 18, 2008 18:43jessica

wow is all i can say
your realy good

January 26, 2009 15:32Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is a very strong poem it is great but i dont think you see yourself very clearly... i know some people who think like the way you do.. its not bad but you should look on the bright side she dont think your weighing her down.. well at least i think not....anyways this poem is great!! p.s. your not worthless

February 25, 2009 18:41Tyler Cedric Golden

sigh.....also to say you didnt like it very much....(hint: the current vote and comment being 1)...lol how sad...owell my bad.....looks like i may need to revise it or.....maybe you just need to read a better poem of mine as an example i suppose...hmmmm anyways on subject now yes indeed this poem is very good and i like the way the end resorts back to the topic....good job!

December 17, 2009 23:58Convalescence

No one is worthless. Invisible. maybe, I understand that... but everyone means something