my love's the ocean, your heart's the moon

By izzy •
By izzy •
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Interesting format! It really works well with the overall flow! Very expressive and heartfelt and great word choice!
i like it very much indeed very well and the symbolism you used in showing feelings towards one another....splendid job....
Dear Smeckledwarf: Very nicely done. Loved reading it. Love, Janjan xoxo
OMG!!! SPECKLEDWARF!!! that was AMAZING ILOVE IT!!! thx for your comment btw. keep on writing!
with LUVE
rachel frella ;)
im SO SORRy i spelled us name wrong this happens a lot with other thigs haha ya well keepon writing U ROX! ;)
~rachel
very sweet! sounds just like love
Maybe love is so far away, and love reflects their heart. Sometimes I think I'm in puppy love because I've written so many about different boys, but it all didn't work out =\
great job very intresting
its pretty good the way its written
Yeah Izzy, I love this poem it's relatable and true. Thanks for positive feedback on my poem.
wow this is amazing!
its very good:)
i like this one. and thanks for the comment