INSIGHT, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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looking at these corpses of the spiritually slain.
we are pushed & pulled by the schemes of the sinful man
i'v found my self lost in the path of a life in vain.
& now i see that all the cluder of this earth forever shall
not stand
i need to brake down these hollow walls of dread
& stop loving only that within the barriers set by thy own
mind.
that i may free my self from these memories stuck in thy own
head
that witch bound me by the clutches of time
01/15/09 |
| Posted: 2010-05-30 17:13:46 UTC |
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| 2008-12-18 16:02:34 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| huh.....it is a good poem but what motivated you to write it is misunderstood but it is a nice poem..... |
| 2008-12-19 06:52:43 | Chalan |
| I sort of catch the drift of what you are saying in your poem. that we cannot be persuaded by man's desire and the things of this world. but to be spiritually strong and crave the things that are good and of God.
But at the same time it feels like your poem is a bit scattered or that something is missing in it. |
| 2008-12-19 16:59:14 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
| this poem is just me stuck in a moment of disaster and cant seem to break free
because of the lies and deceit that man create led me to believe materialistic was my destiny
so i worked until i could not work no more and found that i discarded the most important my family |
| 2009-04-18 09:47:37 | miss insashable |
| i kinda wish this poem was longer cause its really deep but good job anyway |
| 2009-04-18 15:50:19 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
| this was longer before but i cut it short for it just seemed to ramble but thanks im happy you like it!!! |
| 2009-04-24 18:48:34 | Janjan |
| Dear !!!A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD!!!: very powerful write! Thanks for reading my poem, My Chance For Romance. I'm really glad that you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo |