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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! •

looking at these corpses of the spiritually slain. we are pushed & pulled by the schemes of the sinful man i'v found my self lost in the path of a life in vain. & now i see that all the cluder of this earth forever shall not stand i need to brake down these hollow walls of dread & stop loving only that within the barriers set by thy own mind. that i may free my self from these memories stuck in thy own head that witch bound me by the clutches of time 01/15/09

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December 18, 2008 16:02Tyler Cedric Golden

huh.....it is a good poem but what motivated you to write it is misunderstood but it is a nice poem.....

December 18, 2008 17:09!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THE LAST STRAW TO BRAKE THE CAMELS BACK

December 19, 2008 06:52Chalan

I sort of catch the drift of what you are saying in your poem. that we cannot be persuaded by man's desire and the things of this world. but to be spiritually strong and crave the things that are good and of God.
But at the same time it feels like your poem is a bit scattered or that something is missing in it.

December 19, 2008 16:59!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

this poem is just me stuck in a moment of disaster and cant seem to break free
because of the lies and deceit that man create led me to believe materialistic was my destiny
so i worked until i could not work no more and found that i discarded the most important my family

April 18, 2009 09:47miss insashable

i kinda wish this poem was longer cause its really deep but good job anyway

April 18, 2009 15:48!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

this was longer before but i cut it short for it just seemed to ramble

April 18, 2009 15:50!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

this was longer before but i cut it short for it just seemed to ramble but thanks im happy you like it!!!

April 24, 2009 18:48Janjan

Dear !!!A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD!!!: very powerful write! Thanks for reading my poem, My Chance For Romance. I'm really glad that you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo