Pain

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By Zelion Thunder •

10/29/2004 Why do I hold onto hope? It it that I'm just dope? All in all in the end I can't cope! I feel rage and pain. All these feelings enter my brain. And yet my eyes cry like rain. A sweet massacre of my soul. I always lose this control. I just keep diggin my own hole! I burn with hatred from within. But all they do is sit and grin. I should just die and let them win! I hope it fails. and I hope it dies. Because no one ever really hears my cries.

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January 9, 2009 17:26Tyler Cedric Golden

this is a very good poem along with the point hopelessness and description used...hmmm if you want my poem (Concept of Hell) relates to this quite well if you would like to take a look but nonetheless fantastic job...