Do you feel like i do?, by Shine-On Subscribe to rss feed for Shine-On

Deep in life
We are all one
Bound to another
Fear to run

Feel the same
As others do
Feel the pain
That i feel too

There is but only
Limited ways
To live this life
To pass the days

So when i die
Will you feel me
Feel this pain
That's there to be

Know what's felt
Beneath my skin
Harvest my wounds
Notice your sins

Comfort me
The way you should
Or care for me
The way i would

I'd hold your head
Stroke your hair
Apologize
Cry with Care

But you'll never know
You'll never feel
The way i do
The way that's real





 
Posted: 2008-12-14 01:01:07 UTC

This poem has no votes yet. To vote, you must be logged in.
To leave comments, you must be logged in.

2008-12-20 02:29:16Tyler Cedric Golden
wow i really like the way this is written along with the feeling....it is a very good poem n i really hope maybe sometime you take a look at some of the work i have in a perspective similar to this....very well written