What I’ve Become

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By Tyler Cedric Golden

I looked into the past at the reflection in the sea And wondered what’s become of me, I hate what I feel inside, Something I try to hide, I hide it when I lie, Because it’s like a face I hold deep down inside A face that quickly awakens when I close my eyes, With hate and unsatisfaction this face looks down on me, My head begins to spin and I go crazy, I’m lost in loneliness without love besides family, I have a purpose deep within some place inside of me, I look for it so hardly concentrated and deep Deeper than any type of sleep And I need someone to care for and love, And get those feelings returned, Will I fly high in the clouds of heaven or under the surface and be burned, I don’t know partially any or just some, I just know it’s what I’ve become. By: Tyler Golden 10/17/08

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December 18, 2008 00:34Julia Anne

very nice
I really liked it

December 18, 2008 17:24!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

I LIKE HOW THIS FLOWS LIKE A WINDING ROAD

February 6, 2009 12:47shreya

I really like this one :)
Just one thing though, shouldn't the word be "looked" instead of "look" in the first line. cause the tense in the second sentence if different.

May 3, 2009 20:11liberty moon

good Job...
thanks for the comments on my poem i am glad you like it.
keep writing don't stop