I still remember, by LostSoul
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Today is just another day.
Time has passed and you are still away.
I'm feelin' a little better
Even if only for a little.
I still think about you everyday
Even though I try to make the pain go away.
I still remember your smell.
I still remember your kiss.
I still remember your voice.
I still reminisce...
Why don't you care?
Why did you leave?
How could you dare?
I still remember your smell.
I still remember your kiss.
I still remember your voice.
I still reminisce...
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| Posted: 2008-12-17 05:13:24 UTC |
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| 2008-12-18 16:20:15 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| hmmm....interesting i dont see why you didnt make it longer with a little more detail...dont get me wrong it is a good poem but i think you could do more to it because you are a very talented writer.....good poem though.... :0 |
| 2008-12-19 01:39:09 | LostSoul |
| Thank you for the comment. Yes, I also believe it is an incomplete work. Just one of those writers block, but I needed to write so I wrote what I could. |
| 2009-10-25 23:25:35 | Hannah George |
| This is really awesome, and filled with passion. |
| 2010-01-04 13:42:26 | Convalescence |
| Beautifuly sad.. It's how life goes. I like the poem
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