I still remember

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By LostSoul •

Today is just another day. Time has passed and you are still away. I'm feelin' a little better Even if only for a little. I still think about you everyday Even though I try to make the pain go away. I still remember your smell. I still remember your kiss. I still remember your voice. I still reminisce... Why don't you care? Why did you leave? How could you dare? I still remember your smell. I still remember your kiss. I still remember your voice. I still reminisce...

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December 18, 2008 16:20Tyler Cedric Golden

hmmm....interesting i dont see why you didnt make it longer with a little more detail...dont get me wrong it is a good poem but i think you could do more to it because you are a very talented writer.....good poem though.... :0

December 19, 2008 01:39LostSoul

Thank you for the comment. Yes, I also believe it is an incomplete work. Just one of those writers block, but I needed to write so I wrote what I could.

October 25, 2009 23:25Hannah George

This is really awesome, and filled with passion.

November 24, 2009 17:31Edward S Bumgarner

Sad...

January 4, 2010 13:42Convalescence

Beautifuly sad.. It's how life goes. I like the poem