Quit That, by < * † ♦ ♥ glowz ♥ ♦ † * >
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What a time, oh, what a time is this.
I give all I've got, and it's still hit and miss.
If you could be me what would you do
break em, or shake em, or tear em into?
It's been a long time, but the hurt hangs around
and I've grown weary of playing the clown.
I'd like to know if I'm so different than you
If two packs a day..tell me what would you do?
It could be candy, or it could be gum
but if it' s not, would you call me dumb?
what ever it is ...I don't care a bit!
for 2009 begins with something to quit.
Have a happy one!
and Quit that! :)
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| Posted: 2009-01-02 22:02:25 UTC |
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| 2009-01-08 17:18:53 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| lol a good and playful poem that has its own message...i like this poem...very nice... |
| 2009-01-15 22:56:28 | Danny Wilson |
| a good poem because it has a clear meaming I liked it very much. Danny |
| 2009-01-16 17:47:05 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| its cedric....lol idc im jus playn...no but it really is... ;) thanks for tha comment......you need to write more as well so i can check it out...peace |
| 2009-07-27 16:58:11 | Becky Louise |
| I think that this poem was very good I wish I was as good a writing as you |
| 2010-07-22 14:49:01 | |
| thanks for all the coments! :) God Bless You all! |