Quit That

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By < * † ♦ ♥ glowz ♥ ♦ † * >

What a time, oh, what a time is this. I give all I've got, and it's still hit and miss. If you could be me what would you do break em, or shake em, or tear em into? It's been a long time, but the hurt hangs around and I've grown weary of playing the clown. I'd like to know if I'm so different than you If two packs a day..tell me what would you do? It could be candy, or it could be gum but if it' s not, would you call me dumb? what ever it is ...I don't care a bit! for 2009 begins with something to quit. Have a happy one! and Quit that! :) < * † ♦ ♥ glowz ♥ ♦ † * >

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January 8, 2009 17:18Tyler Cedric Golden

lol a good and playful poem that has its own message...i like this poem...very nice...

January 15, 2009 22:56Danny Wilson

a good poem because it has a clear meaming I liked it very much. Danny

January 16, 2009 17:47Tyler Cedric Golden

its cedric....lol idc im jus playn...no but it really is... ;) thanks for tha comment......you need to write more as well so i can check it out...peace

March 22, 2009 05:44!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

NICE JOB LOL

July 27, 2009 16:58Becky Louise

I think that this poem was very good I wish I was as good a writing as you

thanks for all the coments! :) God Bless You all!

December 11, 2010 03:19 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

you quit! I quit! :D