Lonely

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By Danny Wilson

Nobody wants to be lonely If your Lonely and need to be cared for That the ache and pain is there evermore You feel its now the end of the line Nobody understands they listen, yet do not hear The cry for help is it because outside You look fine Inside your heart churns and you are in fear Of losing all those who you hold so dear If only you could release those feelings held inside To open up and never mind your pride Then perhaps once again the sun will shine and then once more your life becomes devine It sounds so easy to do just that But not when your treated like a mat To be trod on ignored and treated like mud Brings back all of those feelings with a thud You have to have been there to understand why its enough to make a grown man cry So the next time your asked to listen please do As this so easy could be you Danny Wilson

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January 8, 2009 17:06Tyler Cedric Golden

that is a very good poem and i love the descriptiveness and the words used to rhyme...and thank you for your previous comment and yes i would love your opinion on my poems...once again thank you for your compliment as well as your comments and good job on this poem...Tyler

January 28, 2009 00:16moshqueen

wonderful description. it is very true to the real thing.
Thank you for your comments on my poems as well. the two you had commented on were very emotionally linked to how i was struggling at the time of writing them. I look back now to think I have grown as a person quite a lot since then.