Our Shared Feelings

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By Danny Wilson

To all you Poets out there who share your grief I do hope and pray sharing gives you some relief Some who read our poems think its mostly from our mind To those all I can say is your so very unkind For most of us our poetry comes from within It also brings relief and helps us to unwind To share our pain yes because each has aches and sorrow, tears shed while on our own We often think its our life we have blown From words said perhaps in haste But once said its hard to retract The damage is done and that's a fact We have all been there at one time or another Hurt by a Mum Dad Sister or Brother Or perhaps by a loved one or another No matter who, the pain is just the same We feel so scared lonely and afraid Yes confused at times when doubts set in Was it me at fault? was it really a mortal sin Am I really the one who do not belong Why am I always the one who is in the wrong We try to get answers but mostly it's in vain Try to talk to make sense, when all it does is start all over again .By Danny Wilson

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January 31, 2009 22:34Chalan

I really like this poem. Its speaks the truth about what lies behind the words of a poet's poem. Thank you so much for your comments on my poems.

February 16, 2009 18:42Chalan

Yes the poem i wrote " Stolen gift" was about an unborn child. I had a miscarriage and it was really painful because I was so excited about having that little one. I'm glad to hear that someone else had gone through a similar experience. I am sorry for your loss I hope that reading my poem brought a little comfort in knowing that you and your partner are not alone as I'm sure we share the same pain in losing a little one.

March 8, 2009 00:50Tyler Cedric Golden

i do very much like the rhymes of this poem and you have done a fantastic job...i havent heard from you in awhile so i hope you are ok and i have written a vast amount of poetry lately if you would like to take a look....Tyler