Solitude Within

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By Danny Wilson •

As I walk along the beach all alone with the wind and rain. Beating down with relentless force. Stinging my eyes with tears wetting my cheek. Or are the tears from the solace I seek. Here alone with the force of the storm am I battling my self and pretending its the norm. Why do I always end up this way? Why do I never feel comfort from walking the street? It has to be here on this sandy shore, bringing my aching heart to ride out the storm. Is it because I can pretend the tears are not real, with nobody to witness my humble retreat? Sad times, even happy times, I seem to end up here, to share and whisper there is no defeat From Danny wilson

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January 10, 2009 16:49Chalan

I think this poem was beautifully written and I can really relate to this poem. Thank-you so much for your comments on my poem.

January 12, 2009 17:21Tyler Cedric Golden

i like the way you wrote this poem along with the expression and feeling of this poem...very nice job.