[any suggestions for a title??]

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By SMILING DARKNESS

Once burning with passion's blue flame, Now dry as dirt and burnt away. But I had given it my all. No one other than you Had ever seen me that way. Up close So real, But now nothing left here to feel. But pain. Remorse for what I gave to waste. All my life is lost, Everything I did was for you. I left the house with no key. How stupid I am Never returning to what used to be. All because I left the past for you And now you're gone. Like my once bright blue eyes, My love is fading. Alone with my smile and everything you gave me. It just CAN'T be true How I fell in love with you. And thought you were my future; The way to get to heaven. But all you are is changing, and, I'm smoldering the fire 'till fading. If we are now over, Well that's how it's gonna be. So take my heart with you, And enjoy every piece 'Cause man, You ain't ever gonna find another bitch like me!

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January 28, 2009 00:09izzy

this is very candid. i really feel the emotions and pain in this poem. (p.s. an idea for the title might be "Fading Love").

February 4, 2009 15:41ray!

"You took my Key"? - I think this poem is great, lamenting the past with just the right amount of triumph at the end.

February 13, 2009 03:46Azure Faye

How bout 'fire'? nice and simple. anywho, i loved it. superfish

April 13, 2009 16:11Tyler Cedric Golden

how about this for a title ( No Other.) simple and explanotory accordingly to the poem and nice job by the way...