What a Beautiful Dream, by izzy
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She would always ask me
time and time again.
"Let's play lovers,
but only for pretend."
So you roll up your pant legs
and your feet get wet.
I feel the day's almost over
oh but not yet.
I hold your hand
and you squeeze tight.
You start to smile,
then your face turns bright.
We have to stop
when we see the moon.
We start over the next day,
sunrise will come soon.
At night I
I see the north star direction.
Then i get blinded,
by the lake, moon reflection.
The sun comes up,
and my heart screams.
But then I smile
cause it was such a beautiful dream.
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Posted: 2010-08-26 00:29:44 UTC |
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2009-03-19 16:15:44 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
don't worry about not commenting recently it is fine...but the ones you did manage to comment are the shorter unfinished ones in which in the future will get better.....but any comments on any of them are fine but id say the better ones to comment would probably be about 30 35 poems up from the bottome....and by the way you did a fantastic job on this poem....Tyler |
2009-04-02 14:02:51 | LostSoul |
Awesome write |
2009-04-26 20:37:40 | ♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥ |
its beautiful and very well written.....the truth is..... i read alot of your poems....they truly are amazing!!! =) |
2009-05-28 10:08:16 | dispersed_sky |
imagination really works and your words really help you to show your feelings
good luck!!!!!!!! |
2009-07-26 17:54:20 | ♥ Leah ☺ |
its beautiful... |