What a Beautiful Dream

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By izzy

She would always ask me time and time again. "Let's play lovers, but only for pretend." So you roll up your pant legs and your feet get wet. I feel the day's almost over oh but not yet. I hold your hand and you squeeze tight. You start to smile, then your face turns bright. We have to stop when we see the moon. We start over the next day, sunrise will come soon. At night I I see the north star direction. Then i get blinded, by the lake, moon reflection. The sun comes up, and my heart screams. But then I smile cause it was such a beautiful dream.

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March 12, 2009 00:52CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

OMG!! THIS IS AWSOME, BEAUTIFUL IT IS!!

March 12, 2009 16:16!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

vary well written I LIKE YOUR STYLE

March 19, 2009 16:15Tyler Cedric Golden

don't worry about not commenting recently it is fine...but the ones you did manage to comment are the shorter unfinished ones in which in the future will get better.....but any comments on any of them are fine but id say the better ones to comment would probably be about 30 35 poems up from the bottome....and by the way you did a fantastic job on this poem....Tyler

April 2, 2009 14:02LostSoul

Awesome write

April 26, 2009 20:37♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

its beautiful and very well written.....the truth is..... i read alot of your poems....they truly are amazing!!! =)

May 28, 2009 10:08dispersed_sky

imagination really works and your words really help you to show your feelings
good luck!!!!!!!!

July 26, 2009 17:54♥ Leah ☺

its beautiful...