Death Note

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By Tyler Cedric Golden

Black, frightening, unwanted, unknown, These eyes draw me back, far away from home, As I look into the face of death, My insides feel like they are in a mess, Confusion and uproar, all going through my head, I cannot believe I am about to be dead, I grab a pen and paper to let every one know, I try to write quickly, but I'm shaking and slow......... I wake up to see nothing but flames, Incripted in my chest I see my name, I hope that one day, some one will find what I wrote, And then all can see, my final death note.

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March 8, 2009 13:09CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!!

March 11, 2009 19:27*Psychopathic Child*

wow very dark, but i LOVE IT. fantastic job. keep up good work

June 27, 2009 12:26shreya

Nice.
Do you think "Incarved" could be replaced by something else?

July 6, 2009 06:35Tyler Cedric Golden

yes incripted