Just Die., by Tyler Cedric Golden |
Why did this happen, is this suppose to be fate, Over flown in my heart, I feel nothing but hate, My eyes glow red, My feelings are now dead, For this rage is uncontrollable, I am so confused, Why did this happen to me, what did I do? I'm lost and yet this darkness consumes my soul, I'm being drug down into this dark bottomless hole, But I do not care, For I'd rather be anywhere, Than where I am right now, Fight back this hate, but I don't know how, I am going deeper and deeper into nothing but hate, For some reason I am glad, this is my fate, I try very hard to hide, But it's too powerful inside, Because of all of this, I wish I would just die. |
Posted: 2009-03-12 16:10:10 UTC |
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2009-03-12 02:49:36 | Invisible Poet |
consider it a mutual feeling |
2009-03-12 02:58:16 | Invisible Poet |
why do you laugh when i say its a mutual feeling i feel that way toward most of mankind i am so consumed with rage no one will even think twice about helping me, my mother feels unsafe in her own home and i feel exactly the way i do an unexplainable mass of emotions that all roll over into rage. |
2009-03-28 00:41:16 | MorbidMaiden |
This strikes a very personal note. You have captured emotion beautifully. xxx |
2009-04-26 17:10:06 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
This is really emotional, its really good peom, at soem point in my life i have felt that way, but not anymore.. |