Beauty Of Our Innocence

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By Felicia •

I strained my eyes to look, to see A figure emerging form the snow dusted street Clasping hands we walked together The wind was piercing cold Bringing our bond closer than before We swung our arms Our movement was magical Sparkling in the falling snow I felt strong and fearless In your strong embrace Nothing could bring me down I inhale the frosty air,feeling it enter my lungs Your warm touch comforting me The feeling of ecstasy running through our lips Our energy becoming one as you trace my neck Your sweet breath whispering in my ear Your eyes hold mine Passion flowing through Showing the beauty of our innocence

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March 13, 2009 03:13Tyler Cedric Golden

yes this is a very good poem i like the feel it gives plus the detail and vocabulary used in this...you did a fantastic job and thank you for your previous comments..and yes the darkness of my more recent poems reflects the darkness upon my life...but once again great job!

March 13, 2009 11:53Tyler Cedric Golden

wow thank you very much for your previous comment and yes i hope i do become famous in poetry one day and can get a book out there soon and if i do i will notify you :).....anyways thank you for showing me such appreciation about my poems...and by the way you are a very good writer yourself so do not think for a second you wont make it some where....Tyler

March 13, 2009 16:46Tyler Cedric Golden

also if you ever get the chance i would like your opinion upon two specific poems(A Message to the One I love / The Unknown Cyclone) i would like to know what you think about those two...also any of the ones i wrote today if you would like to take a look...and remember if you ever need help on starting on writing on a certain topic just let me know.....Tyler

March 18, 2009 01:48Tyler Cedric Golden

hope whenever you get back you get to view my new poems! especially (Your Mistake, My Problem) that I wrote I'm positive you'll like it. hope your safe and get back soon!....Tyler

March 23, 2009 02:34!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

beautiful picture of passion