Perfect Death., by Tyler Cedric Golden
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When you feel this pressure, this loss of all control,
You cannot do anything, you can't grab a hold,
Onto the essence of life, or anything at all,
Your life comes to a complete hault, and then you fall,
Down into darkness and the unknown,
It is cold and lonely, the opposite of home,
It is a place where torture and actions are merciless,
This is what is described to as, perfect death. |
Posted: 2009-05-12 16:35:45 UTC |
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2009-03-31 20:29:49 | Felicia |
this poem is very good. Not just because of the death I'll have you know haa. You have much passion in your writing. You write from things you feel and it makes your work so much better. Very nice keep up the good work. Felicia Mac |