Place of Tomorrow, by Felicia
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I lay down and allow my mind to wonder,
wonder to the dark abyss
Far past what I know
far past what I feel
This place where the hungry eat
and the homeless have shelter
Where the whispers of war have vanished
The tears have dried
The tides have changed
A warm breeze sweeps across
the face of oppression
No more do people look on the outward appearance
Safe in a place, where the sun never dies
and the clouds never come
Where the Times never read about tragedy
Never read of Pain
the news never tells of disaster
Or shows our sins
This place is unheard of, but I believe
In this place of tomorrow
That will soon be my reality
Felicia Mac |
| Posted: 2009-04-14 16:29:39 UTC |
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| 2009-04-14 16:47:05 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| thank you very much for your previous comment happy of your fondness....also if you do not mind check out the other two i just wrote(Life of the Unwanted) and (Waiting for Death to Come) and let me know if you like them....also you did a fantastic job on this poem about time i seen a new one ;)....keep writing...Tyler |
| 2009-04-14 18:04:47 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| thank you very much indeed for your comments and yes i know i did not agree with the last one as much as myself but i was more spaced out in a sense into which i lost focus and concentration on the goal of improvement.....thanks again.......Tyler (Write new poems! ill help you if youd like) |
| 2009-04-15 16:43:41 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| (Pulse) (Long Forgotten) and (Too Real) are a few more i wrote today if you ever get some free time to take a glance....Tyler |
| 2009-04-16 16:34:14 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| hmmmmmmm no response from you after 24 hours that is indeed suprising...i guess something must have come up....any ways i just wrote this poem called (Black Coffin) and its very strange the way i wrote it...i dnt know it just came to me...i indeed think it is quite remarkable but i love your opinion so if you get the chance lemme know what you think....Tyler |
| 2009-04-17 16:11:52 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| you were right on the first impression it was talking about 2 people in love and one being lost in their relationship and participation at your first true loves funeral....
Tyler |