Place of Tomorrow

RSS

By Felicia

I lay down and allow my mind to wonder, wonder to the dark abyss Far past what I know far past what I feel This place where the hungry eat and the homeless have shelter Where the whispers of war have vanished The tears have dried The tides have changed A warm breeze sweeps across the face of oppression No more do people look on the outward appearance Safe in a place, where the sun never dies and the clouds never come Where the Times never read about tragedy Never read of Pain the news never tells of disaster Or shows our sins This place is unheard of, but I believe In this place of tomorrow That will soon be my reality Felicia Mac

This poem has no votes yet.

To vote, you must be logged in.

To leave comments, you must be logged in.

April 14, 2009 16:47Tyler Cedric Golden

thank you very much for your previous comment happy of your fondness....also if you do not mind check out the other two i just wrote(Life of the Unwanted) and (Waiting for Death to Come) and let me know if you like them....also you did a fantastic job on this poem about time i seen a new one ;)....keep writing...Tyler

April 14, 2009 17:00!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

WOW VERY WELL DONE!!! I AS WELL YEARN FOR THIS PLACE!

April 14, 2009 18:04Tyler Cedric Golden

thank you very much indeed for your comments and yes i know i did not agree with the last one as much as myself but i was more spaced out in a sense into which i lost focus and concentration on the goal of improvement.....thanks again.......Tyler (Write new poems! ill help you if youd like)

April 15, 2009 16:43Tyler Cedric Golden

(Pulse) (Long Forgotten) and (Too Real) are a few more i wrote today if you ever get some free time to take a glance....Tyler

April 16, 2009 16:34Tyler Cedric Golden

hmmmmmmm no response from you after 24 hours that is indeed suprising...i guess something must have come up....any ways i just wrote this poem called (Black Coffin) and its very strange the way i wrote it...i dnt know it just came to me...i indeed think it is quite remarkable but i love your opinion so if you get the chance lemme know what you think....Tyler

April 17, 2009 16:11Tyler Cedric Golden

you were right on the first impression it was talking about 2 people in love and one being lost in their relationship and participation at your first true loves funeral....
Tyler

April 24, 2009 16:15Tyler Cedric Golden

man.....long time no comment.......