WHAT DO I SEE?, by Natural_beauty_Ashe
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SOMEBODY ONCE ASKED ME TO CLOSE MY EYES
AND WHEN THEY GAVE AN EMOTION
I WAS TO DRAW WHAT I VISUALIZED
HAPPINESS-i drew a blue cloud with rain because my days were
never happy they to me were always blue
DEPRESSION-i drew a black cloud with rain becuase that is
how my soul is,black,when i am depressed
SHAME-i drew a purple cloud with rain because for some
reason shame i feel is rare like the color purple
HOPE-i drew a pink cloud wot rain because hope to me is
cancer survivors who struggle for their lives
ANGER-i drew a red cloud with rain because when anger
crosses me i turn red,and that is all i see so the color was
very appropriate
THIS IS AS FAR AS I WOULD GO WITH THOSE KINDS OF EMOTIONS |
| Posted: 2009-04-23 01:01:47 UTC |
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| 2009-04-23 12:04:21 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| This is really good...its kinda bad no happiness exist but it will come..i really like this |
| 2009-04-23 16:03:27 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| yes this poem is very downward in a direction towards feelings but you did a great job! and thank you for your previous comment!....Tyler |
| 2009-04-23 21:01:59 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| i feel as though i am this way is this is how i truly feel.thnks for ur comments and to tyler your welcome for my comments.:) |
| 2009-04-24 16:01:46 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
| sounds like your friend knows what he or she is doing now close your eyes and Imagen the sun on your face and the sea at your feet. because you know happiness exists. it just really hard to see within the storms of life! so now close your eyes and draw me a picture of freedom>>>> |
| 2009-04-24 21:08:37 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| i cant darw a picture of freedom because freedom is something i dont see. |
| 2009-05-15 03:34:32 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| yeah i know it is but its just so hard for me to see it right njow.i cant see anything but dark storm clouds that only bring upon me more and more thunder and rain.:) |
| 2009-05-17 23:33:28 | Your Everlasting |
| This is good it describes how a lot of people feel including me and I agree with you not very many people like us have the joy to see freedom,but you never know maybe it's out there somewhere:( :) |
| 2009-05-18 20:03:40 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| yeah its probably out there somewhere.somewhere very far away from us so that we couldnt reach it for centuries.:) |
| 2013-04-20 03:57:16 | lance |
| when theres a time to mix art with emotion is always great,, like soundless music we can all hear,,, beautiful and well written,,,,,,,,,,,,passion and grace |