WHAT DO I SEE?

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By Natural_beauty_Ashe •

SOMEBODY ONCE ASKED ME TO CLOSE MY EYES AND WHEN THEY GAVE AN EMOTION I WAS TO DRAW WHAT I VISUALIZED HAPPINESS-i drew a blue cloud with rain because my days were never happy they to me were always blue DEPRESSION-i drew a black cloud with rain becuase that is how my soul is,black,when i am depressed SHAME-i drew a purple cloud with rain because for some reason shame i feel is rare like the color purple HOPE-i drew a pink cloud wot rain because hope to me is cancer survivors who struggle for their lives ANGER-i drew a red cloud with rain because when anger crosses me i turn red,and that is all i see so the color was very appropriate THIS IS AS FAR AS I WOULD GO WITH THOSE KINDS OF EMOTIONS

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April 23, 2009 12:04CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

This is really good...its kinda bad no happiness exist but it will come..i really like this

April 23, 2009 16:03Tyler Cedric Golden

yes this poem is very downward in a direction towards feelings but you did a great job! and thank you for your previous comment!....Tyler

April 23, 2009 21:01Natural_beauty_Ashe

i feel as though i am this way is this is how i truly feel.thnks for ur comments and to tyler your welcome for my comments.:)

April 24, 2009 16:01!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

sounds like your friend knows what he or she is doing now close your eyes and Imagen the sun on your face and the sea at your feet. because you know happiness exists. it just really hard to see within the storms of life! so now close your eyes and draw me a picture of freedom>>>>

April 24, 2009 21:08Natural_beauty_Ashe

i cant darw a picture of freedom because freedom is something i dont see.

April 25, 2009 16:42!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

well dont lose hope it is out there you'll see!!!

May 15, 2009 03:34Natural_beauty_Ashe

yeah i know it is but its just so hard for me to see it right njow.i cant see anything but dark storm clouds that only bring upon me more and more thunder and rain.:)

May 17, 2009 23:33Your Everlasting

This is good it describes how a lot of people feel including me and I agree with you not very many people like us have the joy to see freedom,but you never know maybe it's out there somewhere:( :)

May 18, 2009 20:03Natural_beauty_Ashe

yeah its probably out there somewhere.somewhere very far away from us so that we couldnt reach it for centuries.:)

April 20, 2013 03:57lance

when theres a time to mix art with emotion is always great,, like soundless music we can all hear,,, beautiful and well written,,,,,,,,,,,,passion and grace

September 24, 2013 21:06Natural_beauty_Ashe

yes,this was a test within myself