I'm your......

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By Snow

I'm your daughter.............hiding her depression. I'm your sister...............giving the wrong impression. I'm your friend...............with the plastic smile. I'm your girl.................with tears in her eyes. I'm your baby.................who's giving up.

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April 27, 2009 23:02♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

awww....this is amazing!!! i love it!!

May 7, 2009 22:25MorbidMaiden

So simply put, but that serves to make it all the more profound. It would be irrelevant to say I sympathise with the message behind this piece, but I do, and I think it is very well written.

May 15, 2009 16:42Tyler Cedric Golden

this is very good with short words but so powerful at the same time...things fall upon us in life forcing us to want to break under pressure and give up...although if something is worth fighting for in the first place than it is worth never giving up on in my opinion.....nicely done!....Tyler

May 16, 2009 15:44Your Everlasting

Snow that is cute,but sad at the same time!