I'm your......, by Snow
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I'm your daughter.............hiding her depression.
I'm your sister...............giving the wrong impression.
I'm your friend...............with the plastic smile.
I'm your girl.................with tears in her eyes.
I'm your baby.................who's giving up. |
| Posted: 2009-05-18 19:47:29 UTC |
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| 2009-05-07 22:25:13 | MorbidMaiden |
| So simply put, but that serves to make it all the more profound. It would be irrelevant to say I sympathise with the message behind this piece, but I do, and I think it is very well written. |
| 2009-05-15 16:42:10 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| this is very good with short words but so powerful at the same time...things fall upon us in life forcing us to want to break under pressure and give up...although if something is worth fighting for in the first place than it is worth never giving up on in my opinion.....nicely done!....Tyler |