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By Your Everlasting •

I loved her the cuts prove it I loved her I can't stnd this shit Cuts of love cuts of hate cuts from above can it be fate Some go deep let blood seep some go low let blood flow fifteen on the arm six more on the leg it can't cause her harm thats why I beg Your Everlasting at the age of ten

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May 15, 2009 16:40Tyler Cedric Golden

this is indeed expressive and heartfelt but personally to me alternative solutions should be found for problems such as this but you did a great job on the poem...Tyler

May 15, 2009 22:53Your Everlasting

Thanks that is really nice of you.I will keep that in mind,Tyler.Have you read some of my other poems?

May 16, 2009 16:45Your Everlasting

4 Sarah!I love you!!

May 16, 2009 22:24Snow

aww.....she's lucky you love her so much

May 17, 2009 07:30Natural_beauty_Ashe

this is very interesting.and good at the same time.thnks for your comments.:)

May 18, 2009 14:00Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is very interesting
i love it

May 23, 2009 13:47CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

Been there, done that!! This is a very amazing poem!!! I feel what ya wrote!! keep going i love it