IM WATCHING U, FROM MY CLOUD

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By CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

i WENT FOR A SWIM BUT I DIDNT COME BACK TO SHORE. NOW I SIT ON A GORGOUS CLOUD WATCHING U CRY AND CRY ITS BEEN DAYS AND UR STILL CRYING FOR ME TO RETURN BUT IM GONE I LEAVE THE CLOUD I SAT APON AND JOIN U ON UR BED. AS I TURN AROUND I SEE A KNIFE IN UR HAND... YOU AIM IT HIGH AND SLOWLY LOWER IT. SINCE I AM UR GUARDIAN ANGEL I MUST FIGHT THIS FOR U. I AUTOMATICLY JUMP IN FRONT OF THE KNIFE WORDS SPILL OUT AND U DROP THE KNIFE TO THE FLOOR... SOME THING WERE MENT TO BE OTHERS WERE NOT. I GUESS ITS NOT UR TURN TO COME JOIN ME ON THIS CLOUD, FOR NOW I WATCH U CLOSLY, FOR THATS ALL IM ALOUD....

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April 26, 2009 15:55Tyler Cedric Golden

this poem is very well expressed as from an angels point of view nicely done....and i am very flatter that you love my work so much thank you very much...and the poem (View of My Face) i hope you do not truly feel like that because it is no solution towards anything...and my love and i appreciate your support very much!...thank you....Tyler

April 27, 2009 14:38Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

yes it is very well expressed!
great work!

May 6, 2009 23:12ma_chapa3xD

i love it! wow that's really an awazing job! your awesome!
~Rachel :@)