Not the Answer, by Tyler Cedric Golden |
Choose to put one foot forward, before the other, But if you don’t watch it you’ll soon discover, That trouble can step over your life at any time, Your life went to a catastrophe from being fine, You get so confused from all this stress and pain You turn to the rain, Because it’s similar to your tears, You run from depression by drinking beer, You get away from stress, But smoking a cigarette, Well this is not your best, You’re not even trying to test, Your body’s motivation; your will, So test your self and see how strong for life you feel, Don’t be destroyed by the poison, or buried by the cancer, Turning towards toxic substances, is not the answer. |
Posted: 2009-05-04 16:08:18 UTC |
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2009-05-01 20:03:13 | true_poet |
This poem is great and it rhymessss! :D oh btw thanks for the comment on my poem I didn't even notice it till today! |
2009-05-04 14:33:15 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
this is great! |
2009-05-29 13:41:41 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
i love it very much |
2009-05-31 17:15:38 | dispersed_sky |
nice one keep it up |
2009-07-10 01:02:07 | Nightlife |
GREAT POEM! This is a very great message to anyone in the world, b/c everyone faces troubles in their life and it's so easy just to turn, as you say, toxic substances but like u said that is not the answer! hehehe like it a lot! Great job on the message! |
2010-02-17 19:47:33 | Craney |
Really well made poem with great meaning in it. I only feel sorry that I ddin't read this poem before. Thank you for your reviews in regard to one of my writings. |
2010-05-15 20:54:32 | Sarah |
i like your poem.. and thanks for the comment. and i would like to say something about the loss you have had to endure because her parents split you up. you will always love each other but you have to look forward and find someone else you cant put yourself threw pain your whole life. we can only move forward because everything happens for a reason.. |