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By Janae_WITH pasion

the old and new the white and blue the fast the slow the weak the strong the counted and uncounted is there a way around? this world is so unpredictable putting people in categories famous are treated like kings and queens while the poor watch their lives go on is their a way aroung labeled society that puts good peopkle in bad places we see the young in enertainment and the old pasing by your life is not rong because your not counted even if your small victories are not mounted your still counted if your not a rich millionaire your still counted if you dont have long hair and the best featured in your heart your counted make the best of you abilities if counted or not dont waste your life trying to get that top spot.

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VERY HOPEFUL KEEP IT UP!

May 10, 2009 13:48izzy

this is really amazing! i could not agree more with everything you wrote in this poem. great job!

May 15, 2009 16:33Tyler Cedric Golden

yes inspirational indeed and very true down to every last word....spectacular!...Tyler