Take My Hand, by Felicia
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I am the voice of the Children yelling
Take my hand Help, me stand again
Give me the support I need to carry on
This life is ours so let me be
Don’t cause me hurt because I can feel
Let me spread my wings
Because I believe I can soar
Please just catch me when I fall
Dry my tears and show me I’m loved
Because I need to learn to be strong
Teach me to respect myself and others too
And Don’t let me fade because I deserve to shine
Felicia Mac |
| Posted: 2009-05-14 23:08:45 UTC |
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| 2009-05-13 16:22:44 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| indeed things to appear to constantly and simultaneously fall upon my path....but indeed i try to make time for everything and everyone out of respect.....and no worrys as well i thought i was getting on less than you..:)...anyways i do like this new poem youve brought about it is indeed very good and interesting to see a varied way of your writing.....great job!..Tyler(screw great this poem was spectacular! keep it up Felicia....) |
| 2009-05-13 16:38:35 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| thanks so much for your comment on the poem i just wrote(well besides the one i just now posted) i indeed enjoy your new style and yes i know, i am slowly writing more interesting and realistic poems again its just my mind is offset....comment back....Tyler |
| 2009-05-13 16:47:03 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| Also just saying in your freetime there are like 150 poems or more that i have you havent read before if you would like to take a look at them...they have always been on there...lol...Tyler |
| 2009-05-14 16:29:09 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| do not apologize for something you mistakenly overlooked it causes no problems...and looking back at previous work can help you make changes in new ones and edit previous ones from your new style improving their quality...so if anything it is not a step back...but a step forward....Tyler |
| 2009-05-15 16:14:05 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| slowly writing a few number of new poems agian...its just im off balance as if my chi has been offset due to distractions of life...humph...well disregarding that i am forcing my way back through and making time to write...Tyler |
| 2009-05-17 23:46:49 | Your Everlasting |
| Good really good.You have true potential and you show it.Written beautifully!!:) |
| 2009-05-18 15:29:14 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| well thats good and i appreciate the comments and the advice...glad you like em...tyler |
| 2009-05-19 16:29:27 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| ummmmmmmm.....yahaaaahhahahahaa....ok sorry....anyways no i just wrote this poem called "Unknown Words" and in my opinion i think i did a really good job and my pride would like to express that and gather anothers opinion...of course in which i favor yours...so if you get the chance lemme know watcha think...Tyler |
| 2009-05-22 16:26:40 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| ok Felicia...well if this poem i just wrote (An Altered Story) has no optimistic affect on you than anything i have done is useless.....it is a long poem and it has several deep meanings......hope you enjoy it.....Tyler |
| 2009-06-11 05:56:08 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| I have updated my settings...sorry for my absence but life has very much been against me lately....I am about to begin writing more again because of the recent events that have taken place...all of them will speak truth and be on more of a pessimistic level rather than opposing optimism...but anyways comment me back some time if you want....goodbye.... |