Concealed Emotions

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By Tyler Cedric Golden

The negative me is red, And the positive blue, In this pessimistic form of possession I never know what to do, But be put out and move forward in rage, So locked feelings are for so long and eventually they rip through the cage, That I conceal them in, my emotions become too powerful at certain periods of time, I go insane one second from previously being fine, People lose control; life is just that way, You cannot hold in and keep all your emotions at bay, Try to watch where they are let out and on whom, No matter how confused, Doing your best, is the important thing to do, Your emotions are brought about in many uncontrollable ways, letting them out is for you to choose.

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May 13, 2009 17:11Felicia

Love this ...favorite line "You cannot hold in and keep all your emotions at bay" yes your poems have taking a turn as well .....its perfect of and cute comment about the other poems I didn't read yet haa. I'll see what I can do :) Felicia Mac

May 13, 2009 20:34Felicia

Wowa just looked through all my poem and saw like at least 4 comments you let me that i didn't read. I feel so bad now. I hardly look at my early poems, it just kinda feels like stepping backwards ....sorry Felicia mac

June 5, 2009 16:13KayDe$

Awesome! I like it. and is so true for many, including me. I can relate to this one. again, great job.

June 13, 2009 21:23shhhh!

wow. this poem is really good i can relate to it completely

July 15, 2009 12:27miss insashable

i absolutly love this poem i can easily realte to this actually reading this poem i feel our writing is sometimes similar style, really really honest great work keep it up