An Extinguished Flame....

RSS

By Tyler Cedric Golden •

Flames are always once strong, but then again, they are also always put out....... There was once a spark, That I felt in my heart, And through time it turned into a flame, A flame that rose every time that one person said my name, And it drove me so happily insane, But then through time eventually my heart was drained, Because hearts are broken and love is lost, It is through feelings that we pay a cost, When it comes to being vulnerable and lending some one our hearts, That we expect to be taken care of to finish from the start, But no instead something rattles your brain, You loose all focus, hope, control, and love, everything, all because of this extinguished flame. (not finished)

This poem has no votes yet.

To vote, you must be logged in.

To leave comments, you must be logged in.

May 30, 2009 15:05Natural_beauty_Ashe

this is vary good and interesting.i love the way you used such a metaphor for love and your heart.although its not finished its greatt.cant wait to read the rest.:)

May 31, 2009 17:14dispersed_sky

nice way
to say
the feelings you bear
so go onnn dear

June 16, 2009 15:55~The Familiar Side of Strange~

this is very deep. lots of detail. though its not finished its truly amazing. good luck.