I cry out,but you don't hear me (For my Mother), by Your Everlasting
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I cry out for you.
I try to reach you.
You're to far away.
You can't here what I say.
I start to fall.
For you,I call.
You don't understand
that I've nowhere to stand.
I am in pain.
I am insane.
Look at me.
Can you not see?
He hits me yet
you always let
him come in.
You say you don't sin
He slaps me.
You can see,
but you do nothing!!
Can't you do something!?
I love you,but geez
will you please
hear me and be the
mother you're supposed to be!
By Your Everlasting |
Posted: 2009-06-09 20:56:02 UTC |
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2009-06-10 07:15:28 | ~The Familiar Side of Strange~ |
You are truly one of the most powerful poem writters i've seen. keep up the good work!! this is powerful. |
2009-06-11 06:45:39 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
this is indeed a very good poem that is heartfelt and expressed very nicely....i have updated my settings and written a few new poems...please ignore the pessimism.... |
2009-06-11 15:03:48 | maddy_7929 |
i love the last stanza the most,
i have poetry written on mine,
it's not that recent to when i actually wrote it but i just added it.
you are a great poet. |