I cry out,but you don't hear me (For my Mother)

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By Your Everlasting

I cry out for you. I try to reach you. You're to far away. You can't here what I say. I start to fall. For you,I call. You don't understand that I've nowhere to stand. I am in pain. I am insane. Look at me. Can you not see? He hits me yet you always let him come in. You say you don't sin He slaps me. You can see, but you do nothing!! Can't you do something!? I love you,but geez will you please hear me and be the mother you're supposed to be! By Your Everlasting

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You are truly one of the most powerful poem writters i've seen. keep up the good work!! this is powerful.

June 11, 2009 06:45Tyler Cedric Golden

this is indeed a very good poem that is heartfelt and expressed very nicely....i have updated my settings and written a few new poems...please ignore the pessimism....

June 11, 2009 15:03maddy_7929

i love the last stanza the most,
i have poetry written on mine,
it's not that recent to when i actually wrote it but i just added it.

you are a great poet.

June 12, 2009 08:12dispersed_sky

you are so deep......