Correct me if I'm Wrong, by ~The Familiar Side of Strange~
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correct me if I'm wrong
it's been 10 months
and I'm still moving on
laugh in my face
I'll take this gun
and put you in your place
correct me if I'm wrong
its been a lifetime
but I'm still looking strong
you left me for her
thats where you fucked up
well, to hell with you, Sir
correct me if I'm wrong
life is like a cheesboard
and I am just a pawn
you play with me at your will
sometimes it hurts
But I love you still |
| Posted: 2009-06-10 07:46:53 UTC |
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| 2009-06-11 06:49:04 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| i know the way you feel....love remains no matter how much you hate the fact that it exist in your heart because if it grows and becomes love it will remain there in some way....i have just been seperated forcefully away from the girl i loved and gave everything to.....but people do not care unless it is them personally in such a situation...great poem though...Tyler |
| 2010-03-20 23:11:59 | Convalescence |
| Great work, and just like a lot of the others. sad. Beautifully sad. That's how life is I guess. You have to choose to look at the beauty or you'll dwell in sadness. It's not all a choice, but that is one. Love the poem. Keep up the good work. |