Correct me if I'm Wrong

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By ~The Familiar Side of Strange~ •

correct me if I'm wrong it's been 10 months and I'm still moving on laugh in my face I'll take this gun and put you in your place correct me if I'm wrong its been a lifetime but I'm still looking strong you left me for her thats where you fucked up well, to hell with you, Sir correct me if I'm wrong life is like a cheesboard and I am just a pawn you play with me at your will sometimes it hurts But I love you still

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June 11, 2009 06:49Tyler Cedric Golden

i know the way you feel....love remains no matter how much you hate the fact that it exist in your heart because if it grows and becomes love it will remain there in some way....i have just been seperated forcefully away from the girl i loved and gave everything to.....but people do not care unless it is them personally in such a situation...great poem though...Tyler

March 20, 2010 23:11Convalescence

Great work, and just like a lot of the others. sad. Beautifully sad. That's how life is I guess. You have to choose to look at the beauty or you'll dwell in sadness. It's not all a choice, but that is one. Love the poem. Keep up the good work.