Autumn Has Ended, by Crimson.Wings
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I walk through the miles of perishing trees
That had once been overflowing with auburn leaves
As I look all around me
The leaves from the trees had carelessly fallen to the
ground
Only to be stepped upon
Over and over
Like a helpless animal
The leaves slowly fade from existence
Until autumn comes again
The sparrows and ravens flutter through the sky
In hope of finding a warmer place for the winter
To find protection from the long, cold nights to come
Rabbits scamper into their burrows
Cooped up in a warm, comfy enviroment
I watch single rose petal falling to the ground
The wind carries it into the atmosphere
Never to be seen again
The sky slowly grows darker
And the enormous clouds cover the setting sun
The moon slowly but distinctly rises
And I start to head home
Shivering and lacking a jacket
I walk toward my home
I see the Christmas tree elaborately decorated
And I realize
Autumn has finally ended |
Posted: 2005-12-03 05:04:48 UTC |
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2005-12-09 16:23:41 | Faith |
I hate when autumn ends... winter is everything i could hate, colourless, cold, depressing. I like the imagery in this poem... good work! |
2006-01-04 22:33:04 | *Diamond Rose Petals* |
i love all of ur poems, especially this one!! im gonna give u a 9 |
2006-01-10 20:06:52 | Awakening Me |
I really love this poem "The moon slowly but distinctly rises". What a great picture. I can see it in my mind; a big orange ball creeping across the sky. by the way thanks for the comments on my poems! |
2006-02-05 22:07:56 | Aims |
Good job. I like this a lot. Thanks for your comment |
2006-04-23 04:23:53 | Mr.Poet |
great poem i must say and yea i took bits and pieces from the song to make the poem |
2008-01-16 23:03:24 | wife2be |
i prefure lol winter but i like this one .....i think i made poem bout autumn once but i dont know what happened to it lol oh well |
2008-06-23 14:10:10 | ray! |
I actually like this nature poem. Some of them can be so flowery and boring but this had definite emotion. I really like it. |
2008-08-22 00:15:53 | Craney |
I hope it would sound good as a song. |
2009-01-09 17:45:59 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
this poem is certainly an amazing poem by the way it was described and written....great job indeed! |