Autumn Has Ended

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By <font color=darkred><I>Crimson.Wings</

I walk through the miles of perishing trees That had once been overflowing with auburn leaves As I look all around me The leaves from the trees had carelessly fallen to the ground Only to be stepped upon Over and over Like a helpless animal The leaves slowly fade from existence Until autumn comes again The sparrows and ravens flutter through the sky In hope of finding a warmer place for the winter To find protection from the long, cold nights to come Rabbits scamper into their burrows Cooped up in a warm, comfy enviroment I watch single rose petal falling to the ground The wind carries it into the atmosphere Never to be seen again The sky slowly grows darker And the enormous clouds cover the setting sun The moon slowly but distinctly rises And I start to head home Shivering and lacking a jacket I walk toward my home I see the Christmas tree elaborately decorated And I realize Autumn has finally ended

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December 9, 2005 16:23Faith

I hate when autumn ends... winter is everything i could hate, colourless, cold, depressing. I like the imagery in this poem... good work!

December 10, 2005 01:12Crimson.Wings

thank u!

January 4, 2006 22:33*Diamond Rose Petals*

i love all of ur poems, especially this one!! im gonna give u a 9

January 10, 2006 20:06Awakening Me

I really love this poem "The moon slowly but distinctly rises". What a great picture. I can see it in my mind; a big orange ball creeping across the sky. by the way thanks for the comments on my poems!

February 3, 2006 01:37Crimson.Wings

thank u!

February 5, 2006 22:07Aims

Good job. I like this a lot. Thanks for your comment

February 5, 2006 23:02Crimson.Wings

ur welcome & thanx

March 10, 2006 21:53 Kirsty (living in the light)

I love this poem and I love Autumn

March 10, 2006 22:58Crimson.Wings

thank you, me too

April 23, 2006 04:23Mr.Poet

great poem i must say and yea i took bits and pieces from the song to make the poem

June 6, 2006 13:25tangerine.kidd

...such a great poem. =)

February 5, 2007 02:45 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

good poem!

its very good i love it

January 16, 2008 23:03wife2be

i prefure lol winter but i like this one .....i think i made poem bout autumn once but i dont know what happened to it lol oh well

June 23, 2008 14:10ray!

I actually like this nature poem. Some of them can be so flowery and boring but this had definite emotion. I really like it.

August 22, 2008 00:15Craney

I hope it would sound good as a song.

January 9, 2009 17:45Tyler Cedric Golden

this poem is certainly an amazing poem by the way it was described and written....great job indeed!

August 5, 2011 20:34VICTORILANE

beautiful poem:)