I cant understand

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By <b><i>*Diamond Rose Petals* •

I cant understand Why a person so seemingly sweet has the heart of a man, that's full of deciet i dont understand why you indulge in the sound of my cry why you love a tear strained face and leaking eyes i cant understand why you continusly break my heart why you tear me to shreds without any remorse I cant understand

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January 4, 2006 02:23wishing_on_stars

I know how you feel. Good poem

January 4, 2006 18:10*Diamond Rose Petals*

thanks but ive never really felt that away..i just wrote about the feeling of heartbreak

January 4, 2006 18:10*Diamond Rose Petals*

thanks but ive never really felt that away..i just wrote about the feeling of heartbreak

January 4, 2006 22:37GDDY

yours pretty good too i just wrote it for fun. thanks for your comment

February 3, 2006 15:33EmbraceLucidity

well, i know the feeling, too. i am glad you wrote it from immagination, it shows you have great understanding and compassion for people who are in thoes sad situations... keep posting:)

January 9, 2009 17:47Tyler Cedric Golden

very good poem for how you wrote it and the words used...you are very good especially for your age..great job!

April 11, 2011 15:18fabiola

eyy you should know that no motherfucker deserves your tears.nice poem.